[2010] Connected

Two arrows thrummed against the cylinder that contained them as she sprinted across the forest. Ducking under branches and sweeping past tree trunks, her senses absorbed the area for telltale markers: the crooked tree, the vines that turned crimson in the afternoon, the call of ghost-birds near the bushes…and the particular scent of demons in the heavy air. She felt it, the nearness, felt the arrows’ bouncing match the pace of the undergrowth, match the pulsing in her souls.

She stepped onto a fallen tree and pushed deep into it; she leaped into the air and pulled out an arrow from her back. The woman touched the ground with a bending in her knees, immediately in an offensive stance as she strung her bow. She snapped her brown eyes open, dark as the ebony of her skin, and met the gaze of countless men and women. Their eyes, pure white irises with a rim of black, all blinked in unison. The one in front, no more than sixteen winters, crossed his arms. He wore two new necklaces, beads of white and black that rested on his collarbone and clattered noisily together, scraping past each other to escape him.

“Are you trying again?” he sneered. Three warriors moved in front of the boy, bows and arrows at the ready.

She knit her eyebrows together, just slightly, and set her mouth in a grim line. “I see the elders do not trust the prophecies.”

“It is not that we do not trust them. We do not trust that they must come to light. Something foreseen to overtake and end this world can only be made of evil.”

She laughed, scorn seeping into every sound. “You all are so arrogant. This world is made of nothing but evil. What ends it can only be good.”

Her souls stirred and stretched towards them, crying for starvation, temptation. The warriors took a step back, surprised at her power, at their power. They dropped their weapons. There was no way to match this, whatever this was– What exactly was this power? What was its name?

Then they heard the sharp gasp of the young boy. They looked over to him, saw an arrow lodged just under his collarbone, white blood seeping out. It had cut the string of the necklaces and the beads began to hover rather than drop to the ground. Some tried to look back at her, but she was already running towards the cliff side. They ran, but none could catch her before she jumped into the canyon.

The sky sucked away her breath as she fell and she watched the beads, one by one, take their place in the heavens and dissolve into the blue. She closed her eyes, a gentle smile on her face as blood followed her down into the river.

A newborn just arriving from the womb opened its mouth and cried. The workers on that floor of the hospital all stopped for a moment, as if hearing a song they once loved. The child, covered in blood and so much liquid, reached its hands outwards, its fist clenching tightly, as if grasping for the sky outside. The night sky revealed the multitude of stars in the sky, shining and tiny like small white beads.

The mother, her eyes soft and dark, smiled at her baby. Although the hospital smelled sharp and cold, the distinct lack of heaviness in the air and the fact that she could only hear the pulsing of two heartbeats responding to one another reassured her tired soul. “There is so much love here,” she said quietly, and the baby continued its crying, so sorrowful and yet so jubilant.

We’re connected at each and every place so
when I think this word, you’ll already know.

“Connected” by Ayumi Hamasaki

 

 

[2010] Camera 4

The actor, a fresh face of twenty-six (so not really that fresh, but makeup artists knew their trade well) leaned against the peeling doorframe of classroom 116 as the lights came on and the cameramen adjusted the focus of their lenses to match the requested shots. He had his doubts about Camera #4. It seemed too far down, too far left. The director paused in his work on seeing the actor, and stared at him, questioning.

“What now, Mistah Hotshot?”

“I just think Camera 4 isn’t set right, Joe.”

“Lew, zip it boy-o. He’s jus’ makin’ yoah head look moah symmetrical, tha’s all. ‘Sides, we gotta hide that scah makeup for scene foahteen. Ey, getcha military pins all settled out,” he added and pointed to the leaning metal pins along the uniform’s lapel. The director muttered a ‘sheesh’ before skittering down the hallway at the beckoning of the producer’s snapping fingers.

Lew sighed, giving up the fight, ignored the squeezing in his chest,  and brought a hand up to his face, careful not to get any powder on his fingers.

Trivia fact #1: Sixty percent of the scars on his face was really makeup. They’d put that on the DVD later.
Trivia fact #2: It was actually eighteen percent. They’d leave that part out. You couldn’t be Hollywood’s new pretty boy with that stuff leaking out.
Trivia fact #3: He actually was a war vet. They had already released that one to the press.

He brought his arm down but the elbow nicked a poster on the wall. It clacked as it hit the ground. The words “All Quiet on the Western Front” demanded his attention in stenciled orange letters. A toy soldier, drowning in clear glue, pointed its rifle at him.

[2010] How to Bake a Sunset

Stretched into a vast shimmering, night covered most of the sky, save for a boutonniere of rose and amber light to the west. I thought of a child lifting a cookie jar to get a peek at the contents. Did that make this desert a granola cookie? Certainly not chocolate chip. I settled on a snickerdoodle and relayed this to Nikki.

Aren’t we more of a bizcochito? she pointed out.

I shrugged. She was right though. I was just too lazy to change my mind.

We turned the corner, parallel to the trains that had stopped for the day. Three crimson and yellow roadrunners spied on us as we walked. I stuck my tongue out at them, the monsters.

Nikki dragged her hand on the fence to her right, the metal diamonds shuddering at her touch. A screeching guitar rift began to invade our silence. I giggled. Gross.

We’re getting closer, she commented.

You’re making them cold, you know. I pointed to the fence, to her hand. The tips of her longest fingers had adopted a weak grey. They look like comet glitter, I said.

Thanks.

She yanked me down by the arm so I bowed to her from the waist, and swiped her middle finger on my forehead. Either a fuck you or our personal Ash Wednesday. I thought of him then. Who he was screwing on his altar now. Not me. Not Nikki. I wondered about when they would find us. Oh well.

Warehouse five-oh-eight smelled of hormones, Costco cake, and misplaced shoes. I liked it. It was…not him, that’s why. The doorman stared us down. Want change? he asked me.

Everything, I responded. He kept the money.

[2010] What is a Good Home?

One: what is a good home? The snared woods, the drum rocks, the cymbal bang bang bang. José started years ago, perhaps or most definitely before the neighborhood even considered a new presence in their idyllic gated community. He had a lanky frame, more forearms and calves than anything. I liked his hair. When he didn’t wear glasses, it framed his soft cheekbones, dark and rough-cut.

Two: Where are the snared woods? I fell in love with him in the total span of one-point-five conversations. The main one had gone like this—

Him: Do you mind my playing?
Me: I hate your vocalist. Sucks ass.
Him: At least you can shut the doors and listen to your own music.
Me: You’re really good though. You practice a lot at night.
Him: I like to play Hansel in the dark.
Me: Where’s Gretel?

He had turned around and walked back inside to finish cleaning. You couldn’t be a fairytale in a filthy garage, after all.

Three: Can ghosts carry hammers? I met his father later, although it took a conversation with my dad at breakfast to piece it together.

“Dad, who’s the guy that cartwheels down the street at sunset?” I asked one morning at over toast and almond butter.

“Mr. Montoya.” He replied and flipped the newspaper on the table.

I twiddled with the butter knife between my fingers for a moment. “Is… he related to José?”

Dad looked up at me over his glasses. “Mr. Montoya is his father,” he told me, as if I had missed out on some cosmically obvious detail.

“But, but Dad. Mr. Montoya… he’s white. Like, really really white.”

“Your point, dear? So are we.” That, combined with that certain way he pulled at his cuff links while reaching for his coffee mug, told me the conversation was at a definite, or at least momentary, end.

José had dark skin, tan despite his aversion to sunlight, the most he got came from taking out the trash or whatever filtered into his practice sessions in the garage. Apparently his mother was of indigenous and Hispanic Colombian descent. His father traced lineage directly through Spain. So yes, his dad was white.

It was the sixteenth of April the following year when José turned white too, a hammer in his fist going bang bang bang on a Mr. Montoya-shaped cymbal.

[2008] Penelope

The rosy fingers of dawn were just stretching across the endless sky when Penelope finished her work. Bundles of thread lay spread around her, silky fine to the touch. She took a small handful and looked at it almost wistfully. It was such a shame her fine work needed to be undone each night. But if it kept the suitors away, she would do what was necessary. Bit by bit, she bound the thread and tucked it away.

As the sun began to claim a stronger hold in morning sky, a maid had informed the mistress that the suitors had requested her presence so that they could address an important matter. Penelope thought little of it, but called for other maids to help her prepare to greet them. When ready, she went down to address the hordes of men waiting for her. They seemed surprised that she actually did as they had asked, but composed themselves quickly.

“We have discovered your deception!” called one suitor. Penelope identified him as Antinoos, the most out-spoken of the men. “That shroud you have claimed to be weaving every day these past three years, you have unraveled at night. Is this not true?”

Penelope sighed. Things had just been falling into a steady, almost tolerable rhythm. But now it was coming apart, just like the shroud. She only nodded her answer. The crowd fell into hushed whispers and utterances of anger, shock, and embarrassment.

Antinoos quieted the group with a lift of his hand. “We demand that you finish the shroud, my lady. You cannot hold us any longer with that lie.” Murmurs of agreement followed.

Once again, she nodded her consent and retired to her room. As she ascended the stairs, she did not miss the pointed look one of her maids gave to a man in the crowd. Penelope’s heart sighed once more as her mind calculated the truth. Not even her love to these women ensured their loyalty. She must be more careful in the future, seeing that there were spies in her own circle.

She left them looking like the stately queen she was, regal and resplendent, but fell to the floor weeping as soon as she was in the room and away from the suitors’ eyes. The maids nearby only looked on. This certainly wasn’t the first time Penelope had given to uncontrollable sobbing.

A small hand tugged at the fabric of her dress. She turned around to find her son Telemakhos looking at her with wide, bright eyes. He tilted his head to the side, silently asking her a question. Telemakhos was a quiet boy, preferring gestures over the spoken word. Penelope decided she would get him out of the habit eventually. It would be difficult for him to defend himself in the future if he never spoke.

Wiping away the wetness from her cheeks, she attempted to smile at her son. “Come, Telemakhos. I have work I must finish.” Leading him to her loom, she began her work. Telemakhos looked on with mild interest until sleep overcame him. As soon as she noticed his steady breathing, the tears began to reappear. They fell steadily as Penelope finished the shroud, wishing bitterly that she could work on it for eternity instead.

A piece based on The Odyssey, obviously, for English class.

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